Tuesday, September 29, 2009

"Wasians review" review of "Welcome to Macintosh"

This review started out pretty solid, but towards the end of Tanner's section it began to repeat itself. Josh's section contained several grammatical mistakes and he stated a false fact. The Apple computer he spoke of featured 16kb of RAM and 30mb of memory. I suggest he fix his mistakes if he wants to attract readers.

-Nick

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